Conrad Rice

Hi Cap'n. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer today. This story started out with a noticeable case of telling. There's no need to list the names and ages ...

Hi hero! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this story didn't really hold a spark for me. It was somewhat listless and flat, and I think ...

Hey Jared. Just saw this and thought i'd pop in with my two cents. I have the same problem as Mars here, in that I'm having trouble finding a plot ...

Hi mirecca. :) I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. Well, I have to say that you pulled off the opposing viewpoints aspect very well. Both men ...

Hey Kylan! Been a long time since i sat down to review some of your stuff. I'll get right down to it. I really liked this story. It reminded me ...

Hi Plus-One. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer today. Well, this is the second time I'm having to type up this review. The first time, my internet cut ...

Hi GoodToGo! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I could tell what the protagonist of this story was going to be like in the first ...

Hi Magnus! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. I have to say that I liked the premise of this story a lot. Though at first I thought ...

Hi huggybear. I am Conrad, and I will be reviewing your work today. She stared in to the mirror, penetrating her own eyes, blood shot pools of brown stared back ...

Hi Crownlessking! I'm Conrad Rice and I'll be your reviewer for today. This was certainly an interesting story. Though I didn't really see much happening in it. So someone is ...

Hi Megan! I'll be your reviewer for today! :) My first thing I noticed has to be these paragraphs throughout. They're incredibly big. And they're mostly filled with description and ...

Hi Rubin! I'm Conrad Rice, one of the Instructors here on YWS, and I'm here to give you a critique. Since I’m going to privet , all uniform school cloths ...

Hi Gryphon! I have to say that I loved this story. I thought that Virginia was very well characterized and a very sympathetic MC. The relationship between her and Fox, ...

Well, this was a somewhat interesting story. I saw some spelling and grammar mistakes sprinkled throughout the work. It's nothing too severe, a quick runthrough with spellcheck ought to clear ...

Hey guys, I've reviewed stories by the both of you before, and thought I would drop in to give my two cents. I thought I could see places where I ...